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Post by ~*~Marie~*~ on Feb 23, 2006 13:26:04 GMT -5
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Post by PrplTddy on Feb 23, 2006 21:14:08 GMT -5
I will read it as soon as I get a chance and I will give you my honest critique on your story! But right now I am writing ANOTHER story!
**Im also going to move this fourm into Stories becuase you have already finished this story, just make a post asking how to improve on the next story.
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Post by animalyeah101 on Mar 5, 2006 9:30:54 GMT -5
I think it is a great start ;D I loved it that you discribed the realationship between sisters so well! I was getting pissed at the other twin when Anna was ;D I can't wait to the next part
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